From the very first time I saw her, I was utterly mesmerised
A captivating scene surrounding me more beautiful then the gleaming blueness of the River Nile
I was totally transfixed on her broad wide smile.
She looked at me and was in thought.
The key unlocked inside my heart, a special treasure she had bought.
She looked deep into my eyes.
Her beauty, her elegance, her enchanting personality to me a special prize.
She walked towards me leaving her footprints in the sand.
To a special place in my heart she seemed to land.
The strides got bigger, longer and wider.
Until eventually I was right beside her.
The waves gushing like the sound of the sea.
Just like I love her, I hope she loves me.
Runners Life 
That’s a sweet poem you wrote there 🙂 very emotional, I can tell from your writing that you meant it. I enjoyed reading it. I write poetry too, you can check out my blog for some tips. I’m always willing to help and give some feedback as well.
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Thank you so much. Your comment means a lot. I will check out your blog.
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Is it wrong to say that this poem is adorable? I mean it just makes me feel mushy and warm inside.
Nicely done!
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I love this! Made me remember all the poems my boyfriend wrote about me. 🙂
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Very sweet poem (:
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What a lovely poem 😊 very nicely put together it’s filled with emotion and truth. Keep writing 👌🏻
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What a beautiful poem! X
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Beautiful!
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Lovely poem, very honest! Looking forward to reading more
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Lovely poem, it really flows (like the river) and it was just so nice to read.
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Ahhh so romantic. Loved reading this. Poetry us one of my favourite things to read xx
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You write so beautifully Faisal :’) such a wonderful heart you have! x x
Ellis // http://www.elliswoolley.co.uk
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Thanks so much Ellis. That means a lot!
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Such a beautiful little poem, my heart just melted. ❤ _ ❤
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Beautifully written Faisal 💖. It’s such a lovely poem. I hope you write more, you have a real talent 😍 xx
Bexa | http://www.hellobexa.com
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Beautiful poem Faisal 💖 It’s so well written, you have a real talent for poetry. Thank you for sharing, I hope you share some more 😘 xx
Bexa | http://www.hellobexa.com
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I really like your writing style, very easy to read and flows very well. Thanks for sharing
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This is an amazing piece of work!
It is such a romantic read.
Wonderful!
Aditi | http://www.winlifewinlove.com
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