Hi everyone,
As mentioned in my bio I also love writing poetry and have decided to share this on my blog so below is one of my poems.
I should probably give this poem a trigger warning as it does involve grief. Thankfully I haven’t been through this experience yet but when writing poetry I like to imagine myself in the other persons situation and think about how I would feel and I hope you all like it.
Mothers beauty
Here I am playing with my toys
Trying to block out a devastating noise
All I heard was a loudness, a commotion
Devastated to know it was my mothers final motion
Still was still, she was gone
From this world she had departed from
A hole had developed in my soul, in my heart
A pain that was clearly tearing me and my family apart
I had never felt such pain such emotion
Only too late I had realised a mothers pure devotion
I long for her comfort, I long for a hug
In a shallow grave she is preparing to be dug
Here I am trapped in grief
Knowing this pain is not likely to be brief
Witnessing her body is quite hard to see
On one hand wishing that it was me
I miss her, I miss my mum
Her face always shining as brightly as the sun.
I miss her, I miss my mum
The calling for dinner she had made wanting me to come.
I miss her, I miss my mum
I miss her looking after me as she had always done.
I miss her, I miss my mum
I miss talking about my problems to her which she didn’t shun
I miss her, I miss my mum
My immediate future looks so bleak, so blearily glum.
I miss her, I miss my mum
Wishing this heartbreaking damage could be undone.
Wow this is a beautiful poem. Actually made me a little bit emotional. You’ve got a real talent for it! Thank you so much for sharing it x
Tiffany x http://www.foodandotherloves.co.uk
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Beautiful.
As a mum myself it was a hard read but a good one.
Thank You for sharing
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Reading this really made me tear up. Thanks for the warning, this was really powerful to read, as someone who has experienced this loss it’s such a devistating thing and can turn your whope world upside down.
Jordanne || THELIFEOFAGLASGOWGIRL.CO.UK
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Powerful poem, you have some real talent. Made me quite emotional! x
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Thank you!
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This is so beautiful and powerful. Your so talented!!!
Lia X
http://www.thegroundedtree.com
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Thank you Lia!
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I can only imagine how it must feel to change from woman into a mother…. ?:)
x finja ~ http://www.effcaa.com
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Thanks for the comment!
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lovely and so heartfelt. It certainly needed the warning! A very powerful and well written piece
Hannah @ The Northern Writes | http://www.thenorthernwrites.co.uk
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Thank you Hannah!
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I love your peom. Very lovely I also write about to on my blog.
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This is such a beautiful poem. It brought tears to my eyes as I’m always dreading the day coming when i’ll never see my mum again
Louise x
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This is beautiful x
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This poem was a beautiful read from beginning till the end x
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Your poem is so well written, actually made me feel a little sad reading it which is great, shows how good the poem is at tugging on your emotions. Well done!
Chloe xx
http://www.chloechats.com
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Thanks so much Chloe!
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